I am Learning to add Detail to my Writing.

Room 8 has been learning how to add detail into our writing to make it more interesting. We can think about the questions: Who? What? Where? When? How? and Why? to help us add this detail.
We have recently started swimming again and chose this shared experience to write about.

I went swimming with my classmates. I went swimming on Friday and we did jump jam in the pool because we always do it on Friday. We do it to practice how to swim. The water was cold but I still had so much fun.

My Reflection

I am proud of my writing because it is a bit long. I think that I did a good job of adding detail. I think that it is a bit easy to add detail because you just have to answer the questions (who, what, where, when, how, why?). I think that I will try to add detail in my writing from now on to help to make it more interesting.